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    dots Submission Name: A letter of lovedots
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    Author: Lover girl
    ASL Info:    17, female
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 83/54/24
    Words: 372
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 534
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1880



    Description:
       This a letter that I can never send. It is filled with my emotions and every thing that I have wanted to say. This is my heart writen out for the world to see! The first section of this is a song called These Eyes!


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    dotsA letter of lovedots
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    These eyes cry every night for you. These arms long to hold you again. The hurting’s on me, I will never be free. You gave a promise to me and you broke it. These eyes watched you bring my world to an end. This heart could not accept or pretend. The hurting’s on me. I will never be free. You took the vile with me and you spoke it. These eyes are crying. These eyes have seen a lot of love but there never gonna see an other one like I had in you. These eyes cry every night for you. These arms long to hold you again. These eyes have seen a lot of love but there never gonna see an other one like you.

    This song shows almost exactly how I feel about you. I still love you and I don’t know what to do without you. You made me whole. You are funny, sweet, kind, handsome, and a really good listener. I can tell you anything and I know that you will keep it our little secret. I love that I trust you more than anyone else. Even though you hurt me I still will always trust you with my life, and even if you did betray me I would still love you with all my heart and soul. You are the one for me. I just hope you find that to be true before it is to late.

    I will always be yours.
    I will always love you.
    I will always dream of you.
    Of you touch,
    Of your sweet kiss.


    I need you and until you know that I am lost. I will search the world for someone like you, But I will never find anyone close in comparison. Please, look into your heart and see that we are meant to be together forever. I love you

    I finally had the courage to write this all down so don’t just throw it way. Jeff, You made me the happiest person in the world in just the short time we were together, I want to get all of that happiness back...Or at least try too.

    Yours for always
    Katie




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      deep passionate write here emotional could tell you have an strong love for this person, well i enjoyed reading it an hope to read a new one soon, good luck tyson
    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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