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    dots Submission Name: My Addictiondots
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    Author: black rose13
    ASL Info:    16/f/where do I live?
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 137/97/39
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 909
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsMy Addictiondots
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    I understand that I've made a mistake.
    But all these rules i break,
    are just a risk I have to take.

    And I always tell myself,
    i know this doesn't take the pain away,
    but it feels so damn good.
    And now the consequence for this act is
    hiding under the sleeves and bracelets.

    I'm sorry for how much I hurt you.
    But I'm an addict for self-destruction.

    And I always tell myself,
    I know this doesn't take the pain away,
    but it feels so damn good.
    And now the consequence for this act is
    everyone seeing the scars that have made you scared for my life.

    For every night I saw scarlett red drip to the floor, I remembered how many times tears fell from your eyes,
    to know that if I went in too deep I may not
    come back.

    And I always tell myself,
    I know this doesn't take the pain away,
    but it feels so damn good.
    And now the consequence for this act is
    being an addict for this deathly high.




    Submitted on 2007-04-01 19:08:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh honey. you can't be doing this. i kinda get it. you've got some good lines. but sweety you can't start that up again before you know it you'll be as 18 moving out and you're in control. don't do this
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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