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Submission Name: My Addiction dots

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Author:	black rose13
ASL Info:	16/f/where do I live?
Elite Ratio:	1.35 - 137/97/39
Words:	183

Class/Type:	Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
Total Views:	898
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	1108

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My Addiction dots

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I understand that I've made a mistake.
But all these rules i break,
are just a risk I have to take.

And I always tell myself,
i know this doesn't take the pain away,
but it feels so damn good.
And now the consequence for this act is
hiding under the sleeves and bracelets.

I'm sorry for how much I hurt you.
But I'm an addict for self-destruction.

And I always tell myself,
I know this doesn't take the pain away,
but it feels so damn good.
And now the consequence for this act is
everyone seeing the scars that have made you scared for my life.

For every night I saw scarlett red drip to the floor, I remembered how many times tears fell from your eyes,
to know that if I went in too deep I may not
come back.

And I always tell myself,
I know this doesn't take the pain away,
but it feels so damn good.
And now the consequence for this act is
being an addict for this deathly high.

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oh honey. you can't be doing this. i kinda get it. you've got some good lines. but sweety you can't start that up again before you know it you'll be as 18 moving out and you're in control. don't do this
| Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.