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    dots Submission Name: One More Timedots
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    Author: MornSweetSong
    ASL Info:    21/female/wales
    Elite Ratio:    4.42 - 110/83/46
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 931
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1165



    Description:
       This seems really blunt and emotionless to me, which is how I feel, I realise the weakness in the rhyming structure but its MY feelings being portrayed, so don't even go there.


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    dotsOne More Timedots
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    I can't count the times I've said sorry,
    For breaking up - but you said 'don't worry'
    I can't explain why I did it, over again.
    I wouldn't do the same things now that I did then.

    How many times can you forgive and forget?
    I love you so much...and the past I regret.
    I could never tell you this to your face,
    You took it with dignity, took it with grace.

    If I have to talk to you, every day of my life,
    I will regret losing you, not once but twice.
    Every day, my heart will break and fade,
    I will weep over the mistakes that I made.

    We're speaking again now, to my geat joy,
    You're a strong man, grown from loving boy.
    I'm a better friend, I know where loyalties lie,
    I hope we can start again, or just give it a try.

    If that's asking too much, I understand.
    If you think I'm playing games, or I am underhand.
    I cannot expect, for you to believe what I say,
    So I'll let my heart shatter - Every Single Day.





    Submitted on 2007-04-01 19:26:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very moving piece, even if it does have a weak rhyming structure. ;)
    Seriously though, I really liked it. They say it's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all, but when you hurt like that...
    It pains me that you hurt. I've never met you, heard you laugh, or seen you cry; but through your words, I just might die.

    The Bird
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by Swimming Bird | [ Reply to This ]


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