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    dots Submission Name: thank you momdots
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    Author: boo boo
    ASL Info:    18/f/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 108/104/60
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsthank you momdots
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    Thank you mom.

    Thank you mom for being there,
    to chase away the scary nightmares,
    to kiss my bruises and scrapes,
    to correct and punish me for my mistakes.

    Thank you mom for being my hero,
    to all the times when you told me no,
    for all the stuff you do and the care you show,
    to all the times when I felt angry and low.

    Thank you mom for being my friend,
    through the hard times I've had you give me strength,
    you showed me that you will stand and defend,
    and helping my broken hearts learn to mend.

    Thank you mom for showing me love,
    for showing me that love is something you can never have enough of,
    for holding my hand when my life was rough,
    for making me who I am today to come through a battle brave and tough.

    Thank you mom for being my mom.




    Submitted on 2007-04-01 19:57:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really cute. It kind of makes me sad, though, that this type of gratefullness is so rare for teenagers, though.
    Keep writing!
    ~FarFromSanityy~
    | Posted on 2007-04-01 00:00:00 | by FarFromSanityy | [ Reply to This ]


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