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    dots Submission Name: Spindots
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    Author: Ygi
    ASL Info:    17/m
    Elite Ratio:    5.55 - 290/149/165
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 100
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    dotsSpindots
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    slow down and let me prove
    I'm not as cold and long living
    as I seem to be
    and don't you know what's going on by your side
    don't you wish that things weren't so pretty when you're down
    your eyes aren't closing so easy
    even though they're so heavy
    the earth will turn as the clouds sit
    we miss all our good thoughts
    as we spin on by
    swirling and flying to the sky
    windows rain and seem to cry

    now if you wouldn't mind then
    neither would I
    and if you could look into your own eyes
    you would see what all the fuss was about
    maybe now you'll see I'm true
    as I can seem to be
    and I'm not nearly as blue as my consience
    leads me to be
    now I see neither are you




    Submitted on 2007-04-02 03:59:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This seems like a relationship gone bad. this poem almost made me cry. i don't know what else to say. this poem has left me speechless. this was an amazing write.

    <3 black rose
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]



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