thing that get us through till death... -------------------------------------------
a tiny pinch of the blades edge
different spouses we lay in bed
drugs that calm us down
the friends that wont let us frown
small thing that get us through life
how long till they cause suffering and strife?
they say theyll fight to the end
but give up when thing begin to bend
they dont like to feel pain
theyre too afraid to break
running kepps you in a hole
doubt keeps you from your goal
one person screws up your heart
voices will come from the dark
nothing/nobody is around...again
theyre nowhere around
now you begin to frown
run into the closet and grab the gun
no more games, no more fun
will it end the pain?
Not too bad. Do some grammatical revisings. You left off a couple of "s"s and "kepps" instead of "Keeps". For clairity, I suggest you use more punctuation in this one (wont to won't theyre to they're) Basic revision stuff. ...I just looked at the comments you want, sorry they weren't sympathies.
I know that I hate it when someone tells me that they "Understand" what you're going through. But they don't really because they don't know where you're coming from. Many of my friends want to be there for me when I need them, but I know that the majority of them just don't quite get it. It would be easier to take the shot or to take the pills...but isn't that giving in? Nobody can really take away your pain. It's something that you're going to have to work through yourself because it's all mental. I'm still trying to get through suicide thoughts that I've had for years. "They'd be better off without me", "They'd be happier if I were gone", "Nobody really cares". ...Sorry this is long....ranting helps.