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    dots Submission Name: Hiccupsdots
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    Author: goveiac
    ASL Info:    30/M/Toronto
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 57/71/61
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    There was a choke of dust in the air.
    Your heart went out, the same with your fears.
    Hiccups out of nowhere.

    Find the dust coming cold.
    When all the answers get too old,
    and the proof that starts to unfold.
    You have hiccups out of nowhere.

    Everyone had opinions,
    they came flying in....everywhere!
    Take a drink standing on your head,
    flood in your nose and wish i were dead...
    I got Hiccups out of nowhere.

    And push your fakers into theirs
    Until your eyes run with tears,
    and the room fell silent as they all strained to hear.
    It came from all sides, down through the years.
    And just then out of nowhere,
    these hiccups disappeared.




    Submitted on 2007-04-02 10:56:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, I really like this. Great use of metaphor here. :> This is an original thought. The ending is very sad. Where did all the love go?
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]



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