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    dots Submission Name: let me screamdots
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    Author: yamifox
    ASL Info:    19/ female/somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    0.78 - 39/19/23
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 898
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    Bytes: 700



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       two dominate people as my parents


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    dotslet me screamdots
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    oy...
    here we go again
    the yelling the crying
    they drive me mad
    can someone shut it off
    jeez...
    how long will this one last?
    untile morning like last time
    man...
    i'm trying to sleep
    SHUT UP!!!
    ahhhh...
    please don't make it worse
    i'm depresed enough
    both of you
    yes both
    will make me go over the edge
    stop...
    i'm cring now
    is this what you want
    the tears to stain my face
    to have restless nights all my life
    even if i leave...
    please...
    just for me
    just for the night
    let me be the one to scream




    Submitted on 2007-04-02 18:50:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow leigh high Wow
    | Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this poem.. if itz about ur rents i understand. rents [censored] everyone up.. dont worry though it gets easier believe it or not, when theyre not around anymore.

    bri
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by almostgrownup | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. I can relate. Sometimes you just want to be the one to scream for a change.
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]


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