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    dots Submission Name: freedots
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    Author: iscreamicry
    ASL Info:    20/f/nsw/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.47 - 34/26/24
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 614
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 561



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    dotsfreedots
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    i want to be free - free to be me

    i want to enjoy my life and understand that which i dont

    i want to be free

    i want to be free - free to make mistakes

    i want to be able to stuff-up; to be wrong without judgement. i want to know why i am so ridculed

    i want to be free

    i want to be- free from all shackles

    i want to be accepted and everything im not.
    i want to walk into a room and find smiles not jeers

    i want to be free
    FOREVER




    Submitted on 2007-04-02 19:15:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i really like this one. i can understand the feeling of wanting to be free, great poem
    | Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by Nessyjane | [ Reply to This ]
      so just be free. go for iyt.

    good write.
    | Posted on 2007-04-02 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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