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    dots Submission Name: Me & Youdots
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    Author: BigRed
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 50/52/40
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMe & Youdots
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    I'm sorry for the things I said, I hope you know I meant none.
    But I took it pretty serious, when you said we were done.
    While I may not be with you, our lives never the same.
    I still know those feelings, when someone says your name.




    Submitted on 2007-04-02 19:16:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      love it. even though it's short it has alot if meaning. and i've been there. it's nice to know that other people have been through the same "stuff."
    =P
    **kate
    | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by koolness | [ Reply to This ]
      Short, sweet and sincere.
    Awesome.
    I love it.

    GBG - Leah
    | Posted on 2007-04-03 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]


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