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    dots Submission Name: Final Wordsdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 209
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Sorry
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       Something I would have liked a chance to say but now it is too late.


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    dotsFinal Wordsdots
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    I donít know how to tell you.
    There is no way youíll understand.
    I love you unconditionally.
    Through the good, through the bad.
    I wish you would have tried to do the same.
    No, not you, youíre too stuck up in your selfish lies.
    For all the things youíve done, for all the times you lied.
    Iím sorry but in a way Iím happy that you died.
    You cannot hurt me any more.
    Your power over me has vanished.
    I thank you for making me who I am.
    But at the same time I hate it.
    Because of you Iím viewed as strange.
    You had taught me a lot.
    You had also led me astray.
    You told me to believe in my dreams.
    Then you smashed them in front of me.
    No matter what I did I couldnít seem to please you.
    That was all I wanted.
    It really truly was.
    Now that Iím completely without you I torment myself.
    I should have done more when you were alive.
    But all that ever did was made me cry.
    You really werenít worth the time.
    It wasnít worth the pain.
    The one thing I ask of you will always be the same.
    Dad please forgive me.




    Submitted on 2007-04-03 10:43:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this alot. And, I'm sorry you didn't have the chance to say what you wanted to.
    | Posted on 2007-04-03 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]


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