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Be You

Author: darkwiccan14
Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 125 /125 /88
Words: 35
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Be You

What must I do,
To keep you?
What must I do,
To see the meaning of
Being True?
You must do nothing,
For you see,
You know it already,
So just Be,

Submitted on 2007-04-03 11:47:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Nice. Gets directly to the point with out wasting the readers time on pointless words. amazingly well done. ;)
| Posted on 2007-05-06 00:00:00 | by VampireMaiden | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it, it is short and sweet.
| Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]

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