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    dots Submission Name: Killed by a smiledots
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    Author: Sartanius
    Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0/1/2
    Words: 237
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    dotsKilled by a smiledots
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    I sit and I watch how the gray trees drown.Alone in the cold dark room,i hear a melodic sound, which invades my ears with tears of joy.Everything is lost,there is only one line left,a very long line.I await,the excitement kills me,the ground shivers at her divine smile,spasmodic melodic smile.Everything drains through a tear and in a rational moment i reborn.My body is invaded ,I'm possessed ,I'm drugged,I'm sedated by her unreal smell.I'm shivering, and she's washing my brain with sweet words ,words that shiver my world.I wash my soul in her neverending smile,i reborn in her arms.I can feel her,bitter sweet,her lips tickle my neck,I'm intrigued by the power she has on me ,I'm like a slave, I'm dominated.She's killing me softly.A bittersweet symphony.She's gazing at me ,i colapse,those inocent bitter eyes of a kiddo who learns what love is..everything is so simple....I touch her astral body with a thread of blood,she smiles.Perhaps she loves me?I kiss her tenderly ,she's cold,I squeeze her, a tear comes out.I drain her soul and i wash in her tears.She loves me and the world is spinning.A sincere angel who doesn't know what life is.A perfect tear.Forever young and inocents,naive,crazy in love...I wish....But she's killing me softly as I walk,cause in fact she is a nymphe.I want to die in her arms,forever in peace....It's so surreal.She kills me,she stabs me in the heart.I can hear the cold,silver,piercing sound of Death.I'm dead...




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