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    dots Submission Name: rememberdots

    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       this goes to a certain someone

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    you say you don't want to talk
    unless im sober
    what makes you think
    that i want to remember that day?

    i dont want to remember that day
    what started out good
    turned to hell

    Death was the way
    Death was my path
    but because of you
    i stopped...i lived

    my closest friend died that day
    another was heartbroken
    i carried a burden and lost them both
    because i couldn't help them

    i hope you understand
    i hope you forgive me
    i hope you don't stay mad
    because i chose not to remember

    forgive me here
    forgive me now
    but if you dont
    ill try to understand
    ill try to deal with it...

    Submitted on 2007-04-03 13:30:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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