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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       religious arguments are fun
    but some take it too far
    this ones for you Debbie


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    dotsreligiondots
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    (maybe Debbie was right)

    in the end
    nobody cares
    words are but words
    religion is but a beLIEf
    and "GOD" is but a superbeing

    miracles are rare
    Faith is nothing now

    nobody will accept the facts
    nobody wants to know the truth
    nobody wants to learn
    nobody want to listen

    there is no remedy for thier stupidity
    because nobody wants to take it
    its like a poison to them

    these arguments that speak "blasphemy"
    they wont get us nowhere
    ...or maybe
    maybe they will....




    Submitted on 2007-04-03 14:01:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really do understand your dilemma...more often i've been the butt of many such attacks...its sad how the entire concept of religion is being misinterpreted by people. me being an atheist do have my own theories about god and religion and how they came into earth the first place. your poem has reminded me to put all that thoughts into words...so thanks for the inspiration.

    anyways...my honest opinion about the poem...well...it just ended up reflecting your frustration on the subject, if that was the motive well then this is a good write...

    cheers
    as i am
    adi
    | Posted on 2007-04-03 00:00:00 | by psychoneurosis | [ Reply to This ]


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