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    dots Submission Name: 3 Years Laterdots
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    Author: babygirl09
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 69/63/49
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dots3 Years Laterdots
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    I hate the way you lie to me

    I hate the games you play

    I hate how you act like you don't care

    as if everything is OK

    I hate the way you walk

    in and out of my life

    I hate the way I was ignorant

    and imagined becoming your wife

    I hate the way you sucked me in

    just to leave me here alone

    I hate the way you can live without me

    cant even pick up the phone

    I hate the way you make me feel

    as if I'm not worth a dime

    I hate the way you push me aside

    like your too busy to have the time

    But mostly what I hate

    is the emotional investment that I made

    Has turned out to be nothing

    but a memory that time will fade.




    Submitted on 2007-04-04 15:02:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like the peom. I hope you have better luck.
    | Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      man, i can feel the hurt in this. hope you find someone way nicer...

    zd
    | Posted on 2007-04-04 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]


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