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    dots Submission Name: Naturedots
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    Author: Fernando Corto
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 23/24/23
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 144
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    Beauty is one thing
    But from where does it deprive
    It’s always surrounding us
    How does it survive?

    This beauty is lovely
    It has no physical form
    Yet it flabbergasts me so
    Every time it transforms

    What is it?
    Why am I addicted to this?
    This amazing splendor
    That makes me reminisce

    I even feel it
    When I’m in the dark abyss
    It keeps me company
    And I know it exists

    This beauty is what I’ve wanted
    It is called Nature
    Its here year round
    And it is my creature

    It is snow,
    Rain, hail, and ice
    It is always the beauty
    And always concise




    Submitted on 2007-04-04 17:18:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very beautiful. I'm adding it to my favorites. I really liked it. I thought it was very rythmic and flowing.

    Great job.
    | Posted on 2007-04-04 00:00:00 | by blue_pixie_dust | [ Reply to This ]



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