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    dots Submission Name: Life Sans Livingdots
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    Author: Deadly Sauce
    ASL Info:    18--lady--NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 59/77/31
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 135
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 736



    Description:
       Think for a minute.


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    dotsLife Sans Livingdots
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    Are you who you think
    You are? That is
    The flesh that holds you, does it match?
    We've all seemed to master this game
    Of metamorphosis. We grow
    Up into what we are told to be.

    Our souls shrink
    Like your favorite sweater
    Until you don't know
    If you are who you thought you were.
    Have you changed?
    Don't answer.
    That's what they want you to do
    Think fast.

    Take the idea slow
    And steady. But if you won't accept
    The living you should do, you can never
    Treasure the life you're given.

    How easy it is to disappear
    Into the black shuffling crowd.




    Submitted on 2007-04-04 22:18:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The ideas are intriguing and thought-provoking, but it seems unfocused and all over the place.
    | Posted on 2007-04-05 00:00:00 | by SuperEdgar | [ Reply to This ]



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