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What do you do


Author: Ghetto_King
ASL Info:    19 m ft. lauderdale
Elite Ratio:    0.76 - 4 /33 /54
Words: 307
Class/Type: Poetry /You left me
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when you think you find the right one and she leaves with your heart and you lose your best friend


What do you do



What do you do?
What do you do when the light that graces your life is fading away?
As you add fuel to this flame trying to save its place
You want it so bad that you’ll give your life for it and fight
When it seems as if all you’ve work so hard for is running away from your sight
What do you do when the love that you invested in is breaking your heart slow?
With ever crack and splinter a sharp pain and the phrase I love you has there is no more
So much you want to, but seems as if it’s slipping away
Now truly soul searching stuck in this slowed time and place
What do you do when love don’t love you back
When the structure of feelings we built for one another has crack
What do you do when love don’t love you back
With just a few lonely nights makes forever seem like a day
And you contemplate your departure as tears flow down your face
What do you do when you feel like your best friend has turn face
Now when you need too talk just a void in this gap, this place
With her voice brings pain
The expression we need to talk from ear to ear it rings
As my heart crumbles with ever word she speaks and that fly’s
Saying this isn’t working an my question why
With a few moments of being a part you have succumb to that feeling of being alone
Not knowing that our life together will bring those brief moment to shame
What do you do when the girl you envision as your Mrs. has move own
And now you left with out a heart feeling completely gone




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