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    dots Submission Name: Confused...dots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsConfused...dots
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    I really am confused.
    Someone tell me what to do.

    You say that you care.
    When you whisper in my ear.

    When we are alone you're as sweet as can be.
    But when those other guys are there you just confuse the hell out of me.

    I wish you'd say the truth as you peer into my eyes.
    But all ever hear from you are very stupid lies.

    You think I don't catch it.
    I assure you that I know.

    I'm not as dumb as you think I am.
    Should I let you go?




    Submitted on 2007-04-05 10:24:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You know. Sometimes, it's better to ignore how we act when we are around our friends. Though, depending on what kind of relationship you have you would be cool with his friends too. Most guys are jerks tho, and most guys do care. So I guess you have to decide which qualities are most visible. And if he actually cared about you. He'd be telling his friends that. Even if he treats you different when he's around them.
    | Posted on 2008-06-14 00:00:00 | by Mobleyjd2 | [ Reply to This ]
      I've had a guy do that to me. It hurt so bad after. Well good write. Peace.
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by RedneckPrincess | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this... I was with so many guys that did me like that... They can really be jerks at times...
    Good Write...
    Lizzie
    | Posted on 2007-04-05 00:00:00 | by angeldust | [ Reply to This ]


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