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    dots Submission Name: Prayer In God's Valleydots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       "And he showed me a pure river of water of life, clear as crystal, proceeding out of the throne of God and of the Lamb. In the midst of the street of "IT, and on either side of the river, was there the tree of life, which bare twelve manner of frutis, and yielded her fruit every month: and the leaves of the tree were for the healing of the nations." The Revelation of Saint John 22:1-2

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    Prayer in God's Valley
    Seasons of Family

    And, our souls
    Are NOW
    Treasure chests
    abounding Spring

    Gleaming colors
    Playful wind
    Songs of birds



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      This was a pleasant greeting to the arrival of spring. It shows how much longing there has been through a long and probably arduous winter. Short, concise and rather enjoyable.
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      a beautiful, peaceful prayer about God's kingdom here on earth in nature and all Her splendor.

    wishing you a glorious Easter season and love abounding in your heart and soul, ladyshines.

    | Posted on 2007-04-05 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2007-04-05 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Looks like Spring time brings out the best in you - and your writing. Very descriptive and very good indeed.

    | Posted on 2007-04-05 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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