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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    experience
    is necessary for understanding
    I, envolved into a tale





    Submitted on 2007-04-05 13:36:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this...I decided...

    It makes sense...

    And it's pretty...
    | Posted on 2007-09-05 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      What is up with this?

    Inspiration coming in teeny tiny spurts?

    Me too...sigh.
    | Posted on 2007-04-10 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      In the last line of this little thought fragment did you actually mean "involved" or could you possibly have meant "evolved"? To me, that would made much more sense. Just wanted to share the thoughts that your piece rose up in me.
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]


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