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    dots Submission Name: Waiting For Springdots
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    Author: FarFromSanityy
    ASL Info:    15/F/look behind youuu.
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 52/76/34
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       A new season brings new chances...


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    dotsWaiting For Springdots
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    So sick of past regrets and the pain no one else is seeing
    My loneliness and intolerance is the event of the season
    When the black roses start to bloom and winter snow melts away
    Only then can I rest assured that I am going to be okay

    Seconds to hours are flying by, never to come back again
    When will the Spring warm my winter heart and put my coldness to it's end?
    When will I see there's so much more to life than what I'm giving the chance?
    I want to be warmed by the sun. In the rain, I want to dance

    When the flowers blossom and when I finally start to see
    Will you hold me close and give your love to me?
    Show me what it's like to feel the sky beyond my limit
    To be a better person...




    Submitted on 2007-04-05 18:05:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is really good, very unique style of writing a "love" poem. Can relate to the idea of romantic longing.
    | Posted on 2007-04-07 00:00:00 | by SuperEdgar | [ Reply to This ]
      Girl that better person you speak of is already coming out,
    please just have patients as you learn how to express it,
    you have a very strong purity waiting to be voiced,
    I can't wait to hear it.

    I love your expressive and nice and direct style too!
    ~Matt
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]


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