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    dots Submission Name: Paindots
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    Author: Bleeding death
    ASL Info:    17/f/Beijing
    Elite Ratio:    2.53 - 3/4/19
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 1043
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1635



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    dotsPaindots
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    How often have you heard
    That you can trust a person

    How often were you scared
    Of losing everything

    How often were you hurt
    Because you thought you meant something to people

    How often were you down
    Without a reason

    How often did you just want to run
    Away from pain from fear

    How often did you just want to end everything
    And you thought of how easy it could be

    Just end it
    Just do this step and the pain will be gone
    Just cut, cut, cut

    To you it is the release of pain
    Of not being able to trust people
    Of being scared
    Of being hurt mentally
    Of being down
    Of wanting to run

    To you it seems,
    Like no one cares.
    They hear your voice
    Tired of all your screams
    They see your eyes
    Tired of all the bad things
    They see your blood
    Tired of running
    They hear your heart
    Tired of beating.

    What they donít see or hear
    Are the screams inside of you
    Is your heart just wanting to stop because of all that pain
    Is your brain thinking of nothing but ending
    Are your hands just wanting to change the pain


    Take it all away
    Make the mental pain physical so it would change
    So thereís a chance of healing
    So thereís a chance of getting ride of it
    To not feel the pain
    To not have to cry
    To not have to scream.

    How easy is it to just end your life.




    Submitted on 2007-04-06 00:55:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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