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    dots Submission Name: Shitless,Shirtless,Inhuman Fuckerdots
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    Author: DBC
    ASL Info:    21/m/ar
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 55/59/29
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsShitless,Shirtless,Inhuman Fuckerdots
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    I'm shitless
    wrapped around your cunt
    like a dog
    walk me
    nevermind
    just get off me
    i'm tired
    too tired to get up
    to fuck
    to think
    at least give me a newspaper to shit on
    i'll just walk myself and cleanse my mind
    the mind is my device of self destruction
    and God is in this story
    He's the one sitting there watching my life
    laughing, crying, smiling
    fucking good TV
    thats all i am
    go to sleep shitheads
    leave me alone




    Submitted on 2007-04-06 01:52:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      every dog has his day. the new way sickness. that makes us diseased. the mind [censored] of our own dissapointment. it just oozes malevolence and injustice.. bitter. sweet

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    | Posted on 2007-05-08 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      This is...original. I like it. Mainly because I feel the same way most of the time. Good work.
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by t0_eazy | [ Reply to This ]


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