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    dots Submission Name: The Devildots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsThe Devildots
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    Last night I made love to the Devil
    and swallowed him into my soul, whole.
    Now he is part of me.
    Kiss a toad and watch a Prince appear.




    Submitted on 2007-04-06 04:33:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I just wrote an interesting piece that is along the same parameters - Embracing

    I, too, love these minimalistic pieces that have oh, so much to say.

    Very well done!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

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    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      i love little short fragments of poetry, because i am incapable of brevity and succinctness. the ending made me laugh, because i kid you not, last night a friend and i were on the phone and after a long silence i said-

    'maybe the frog never turns into a prince. maybe we just kiss ourselves into believing they do'

    why is making love to the devil so much more infinitely satisfying than f.ucking an angel?

    i really, really, really like this piece. i avoided this site for a while because i felt it was being overrun with meaningless teenybopper poetry about random [censored] that had nothing to do with anything my life was about.

    pieces like this, and writers like you prove me wrong. i'm glad i clicked on your name, on a whim. i'll be back for more. :)

    original, comical, sexy, darling, daring, provocative. probably much like the writer.

    be well. i'll be around more, lurking. getting crushes on your poetry. :)
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by freeradical | [ Reply to This ]


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