[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: The Devildots

    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 605
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 156


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Devildots

    Last night I made love to the Devil
    and swallowed him into my soul, whole.
    Now he is part of me.
    Kiss a toad and watch a Prince appear.

    Submitted on 2007-04-06 04:33:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      I just wrote an interesting piece that is along the same parameters - Embracing

    I, too, love these minimalistic pieces that have oh, so much to say.

    Very well done!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    | Posted on 2007-04-25 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      i love little short fragments of poetry, because i am incapable of brevity and succinctness. the ending made me laugh, because i kid you not, last night a friend and i were on the phone and after a long silence i said-

    'maybe the frog never turns into a prince. maybe we just kiss ourselves into believing they do'

    why is making love to the devil so much more infinitely satisfying than f.ucking an angel?

    i really, really, really like this piece. i avoided this site for a while because i felt it was being overrun with meaningless teenybopper poetry about random [censored] that had nothing to do with anything my life was about.

    pieces like this, and writers like you prove me wrong. i'm glad i clicked on your name, on a whim. i'll be back for more. :)

    original, comical, sexy, darling, daring, provocative. probably much like the writer.

    be well. i'll be around more, lurking. getting crushes on your poetry. :)
    | Posted on 2007-04-06 00:00:00 | by freeradical | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    written by Daniel Barlow
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    written by Daniel Barlow
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    written by Daniel Barlow
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Linger written by saartha
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Every..... written by jackz
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]