C & C (By Request) -------------------------------------------
It’s time to get intellectually intimate
and I can’t sleep I’m living with fire.
If there’s a world out there to be ignited
drown me with the passion, the life
but I find nothing but resistance
in the condition calmly called home
and I feel I must obey.
What happened to the flavor of nicotine
inducing spirit and the physical to sync with lust
unable to fend this off alone
serious to the point of provocative
paranoia’s etched into these nerves again
with every twitch this body shivers
and there’s no caffeine in this system.
Reality’s a dusty photograph
forgotten in a corner of the attic
not soon to be discovered
but important enough to muse.
Drinking coffee to the point of realism
smoking just to sustain a reflection.
Mirror mirror on the wall what's it like to be so transparent?
"but important enough to muse" try "ponder" in place of muse and do tell what you think.
"...and the spirit to physical" try "physicality" in place of "physical". In fact,
"What happened to the flavor of nicotine
inducing spirit and the physicality to sync
with lust unable to fend this off alone
serious to the point of provocative
paranoia's etched into these nerves
again with every twitch this body shivers
and there's no caffeine in this system."
I think that way...it just seems to fit this piece better.
Also, S1, "I feel I must obey", what if "I must obey"?
Submission Name: C & C (By Request)
