Description: Just writing that on my mind...there this one girl u knwo who u r...n if have anything so say bout this just tell me n we could talk bout it....but im not worried anymore
Keeping My Mouth Shut -------------------------------------------
Keeping my mouth shut
Keeping my emotions in check
Trying to let her handle her own shit.
But she don't know
It's killing me
Knowing she talking to him
Having flash back of my old girlfriends.
Hoping the past doesn't come the present...
My heart says the present is the present
Let the past be the past...
Love this girl intill your last gasp of your breath.
Yet my gang realted past
give me that feelin that burns wit intensity
With every message, every phone call
Im not the person to make look like a fool.
So hold my breath till i turn blue
till I get to feel your touch that is really true....
honey please don't worry about me. If you could be here with me you would understand that you are my whole world and there is nothing in this planet that can take me away from you, or make me go back to him.
I love you, and i will prove to you that i am not like any of your ex gfs
This is all over the place.You have to have some structure for a piece to be effective I feel-unless the content is of sufficient quality to keep the reader interested.Also,using mixed up slang and abbreviations doesn't really work for me.
Too personal probably,hence we can't relate to it.(Gang related past or not.)