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Without me, without you

Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60 /93 /58
Words: 150
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Without me, without you

The view vanished.
Like an echo lost.
I don’t know why,
I thought of you
and my heart turned to frost.

Your words seemed happy, so happy.
Without me.

I had turned away from you
Turned away, in my own way.
And rather, turned to,
a life without you.

Always expecting a little sigh of sadness,
My lovers knew I was bitter and told me so.
It’s strange how I held on tighter to them
and how it’s you I let go.

I was torn and demolished
Thought I could never be loved or cherished.
Lost in a view, of a life without you.
I saw darkness without shades of greys
Then I began to embrace this haze.
Caress it and live by its ways.

It became a view of life without me,
without you.

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