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    dots Submission Name: Newborndots
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    Author: Porcelaine
    ASL Info:    22/F/Croatia
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 872/686/249
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 227
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 994



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    The shade of moonlight stumbled
    Upon the reign of humanity
    And the veil was lifted from the imminent darkness
    Oh beauty so deceptive
    How overwhelming your brilliance!
    You can only stir desire as nothing else ever could
    So this mutilated body of mine,
    This mutilated soul can blossom
    And soak in it's own fragrance of a resurrecting existence.
    Overpowering…
    Disarming…
    A stabbing waterfall of life into a leaping mortality.
    So now I see,
    Through a void past like through a cancer,
    A night life streaming through a heart of a Phoenix
    And dancing into what can only be bejeweled
    As the brand new skies
    Flowing in on a melody so sweet
    A smile escapes and I forget to hold my peace
    And lie still in a tomb they pushed me into,
    The tomb I'm going to ram them into,
    The tomb of a newborn annihilation.
    As I rise




    Submitted on 2007-04-07 10:11:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      As always, your verse has brilliance and intensity; also much artistry! So much emotion and thought is packed into such a short item of prose! Excellent!
    | Posted on 2007-04-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This is as Porcelaine as Porcelaine can possibly be.
    And yours truly knows what to do when coming across one of these.
    One thing I must ask is..WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-04-07 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      Perfect!! To comment wouldn't do justice; but I felt I must say something; so there it is; perfect
    I will lovingly ad this poem to my favorites.


    ~Matt
    | Posted on 2007-04-07 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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