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    dots Submission Name: Another Late-Night Reminderdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       one of those nights I couldn't get him out of my head...


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    dotsAnother Late-Night Reminderdots
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    I lay here
    Listening to him breathe.
    Wishing, wanting him to be you.
    I close my eyes,
    Memories flood my mind
    Of laughter and love
    Times when you used to be mine.
    You image haunts me
    Craving for us to be
    I can still feel your touch
    Your arms holding me
    This hurts so much.
    I screwed up
    And now your gone
    I had no clue
    It would go so wrong.
    So I lay here
    In my regret
    Knowing your memories,
    I'll never forget...




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      just get good and laid till you cant take no more, and trust me, he'll be long gone for you.
    | Posted on 2007-04-08 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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