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    dots Submission Name: Heartbreakerdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsHeartbreakerdots
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    You told me "I love you"
    I didn't know what to do
    I'm a heartbreaker
    A real life taker
    I'll hurt you
    I'll tear your heart in two
    I'm giving you this warning
    Before you go into mourning
    I'm a horrible girl
    I'll destroy your entire world
    But even these things you know I do
    You still tell me "I love you"




    Submitted on 2007-04-07 18:10:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Who is this for? Or what inspired you to write this? It is good. No lie. It makes more sense when you say who you have on your mind. Ok. But very good write. I like. Keep it up
    | Posted on 2007-04-11 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]
      dramatic, but that is what makes it intense. the words twisted a bit in the middle, but overall good.
    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]


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