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:--[A Half-Ass Poem]--:

Author: Sephiroth
ASL Info:    22/Male/WA
Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 60 /67 /29
Words: 165
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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Basically, a very half-ass poem I came up with on the spot. I have no clue what it is about, since I am writing the description before I actually write the poem.

:--[A Half-Ass Poem]--:

A half-ass poem that rhymes
is hard to do on the spot.
The first word I came up with that rhymes with 'rhymes' is limes.
It must seem like I'm high on pot.

I understand poems need not rhymes,
but it is what I do.
Those who have something against it...
Guess what? Fuck you.

Ah, now the fun has started,
I already said 'fuck you'.
To further that motion I'll say you're retarded.
And maybe another 'fuck you'.

Damn, this is harder now than when it started.
Maybe it ain't so half-assed after all.
Nah. I'll just once more say you're retarded.
Yep, this is definitely stupid. Lawls.

My first poem in many months.
Feels good to come back to writing.
Eh... Rhymes with months... Uh... Bunts?
I hate poetry... I prefer fighting...
(Not really, though)

Yeah. Try beating that one, bitch.
Yeah, so this last stanza don't rhyme.
I told you this was half-ass, didn't I?

Submitted on 2007-04-07 22:26:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  silly, silly person.

I got a laugh out of it...
| Posted on 2007-04-10 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
  Mmm, the wonderful taste of stream of conciousness mixed with... some writing. This made me giggle a bit.

| Posted on 2007-04-08 00:00:00 | by Stygian | [ Reply to This ]
  lmao. nonsensical comments aye? :p
this was fun to read. it reminded me of spring on a summer morning lmao. ok i will be good
it was funny, you did know what to expect when you read the title, I'm glad your getting back into writing, sometimes something stupid like that is exactly the way to get past block and into the feel of things, just most ppl don't share it lol. cheers
| Posted on 2007-04-08 00:00:00 | by Kalinda | [ Reply to This ]
  With the title and description, I knew what to expect. I just didn't think it would be so bad.
Waste of talent (if you had any to begin with).

BURN!!! lol
| Posted on 2007-04-08 00:00:00 | by LadyMerlina | [ Reply to This ]
  Hahaha. I love it. I may need to try something like this sometime, because when I get bored, I find myself writing half-assed poems that attempt to mean something and they end up [censored]ty. Now I get it. The key to it all is to purposely have no goal, objective or meaning. thanks. lol. This was fun and it made me smile. Very, for lack of a better word, witty.

Keep writing
| Posted on 2007-04-07 00:00:00 | by Venia | [ Reply to This ]

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