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    dots Submission Name: Something Different (Leak)dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 556
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    dotsSomething Different (Leak)dots
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    There's something different about you
    the way you make people laugh like you do
    no one I met was ever like this
    and to realize you're my perfect wish

    Something different
    something new
    something perfect
    it's all in you

    God must of heard my difficult wish
    to send me a perfect person like this
    I don't know where I would be
    if I found out you weren't close to me

    Something different
    something new
    something perfect
    it's all in you

    all in you
    cause what you do
    perfect person
    something different




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