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    dots Submission Name: No Place (Leak)dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/806/391
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
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    dotsNo Place (Leak)dots
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    Funny how things just turn around when we argue
    when we argue
    you bring shit up thats has nothing to do
    with me and you
    with you and me
    theres no place to be
    this is no place for me

    What about now
    lets bring it all up
    all the shit
    that's been your fought
    what about now
    bring out the dish
    of all the shit
    we didn't finish

    funny how you think it's funny when I get serious
    serious
    funny how your face looked when I said there's nothing for us
    with you or me
    with me or you
    theres no place for me
    theres no place for you




    Submitted on 2007-04-08 00:03:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think you meant "Been your fight". Otherwise this is very true to life in frusterating relationships with people :)
    | Posted on 2007-04-08 00:00:00 | by thetwilight | [ Reply to This ]


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