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    dots Submission Name: My Frienddots
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    Author: Crash
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 1374/490/63
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
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    dotsMy Frienddots
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    My Friend

    Change the lock and turn the key
    Look back at the same old me
    You're a mirror

    Is it to challenge your heart
    Or to surrender to fear
    Yeah I've been there

    Is it easier to hide
    Than to put away your pride
    Can you decide

    Are you really in control
    Or just afraid to let go
    Its not fair

    Now you move at your own pace
    Down a road you didn't wanna take
    You're confused and alone
    Acting tough but it all shows
    Half your life has changed its mind
    You can't leave yourself behind
    Put your face under a cloud
    Go taste the rain you won't drown
    Remember when you were me
    The day I stopped dreaming dreams
    Refused to believe the truth
    That I really needed you
    Its my turn to help you mend
    Let me love you My Friend

    Are you really in control
    Or just afraid to let go
    Its not fair

    2007 Ron Morgan




    Submitted on 2007-04-08 13:14:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    I FREAKIN' LOVE YOU!
    | Posted on 2007-07-28 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      This was written nicely, and with reading it I could hear music play in my head, probabally not the right music but music nevertheless. I liked it it reminded me of one of my old friends, but I don't think it flowed very well. Other than that, it was great. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

    Saint Razor
    | Posted on 2007-04-08 00:00:00 | by brknprclndol | [ Reply to This ]


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