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    dots Submission Name: clear eyesdots

    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    it took some time for me to see
    the path life layed out for me
    now its not hard for me to believe
    that i can achieve what i need
    i know its easier to go this way
    my head falls back as i let go this time.

    i found something i could love
    i gave myself its all
    held on tight when i thought it was over
    this time ive come out on top
    i wouldnt give this up
    to walk a day in my old shoes.

    im waiting for the falling out
    but i know its not coming this time
    by holding on tight
    i changed something in my life
    ive learned to bend but not fall
    i guess you could say
    ive grown up.

    Submitted on 2007-04-08 21:57:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ... i love this we all have to grow up sometime in life and this proves it right here! great job expressing yourself i got the message loud and clear i love it!!!

    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a good inspirational piece for urself, a coming out of sorts.....indentifing changes in ur life.

    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      In opposing what "Psyco" sys, I believe art is any work where the author has allowed her/his heart to speak,
    It's even more a gift when it is able to be written in simplistic tongue,
    I really liked this piece, great write!

    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      good message... but far away from art
    | Posted on 2007-04-08 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]

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