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    dots Submission Name: Outcast.dots
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    Author: FarFromSanityy
    ASL Info:    15/F/look behind youuu.
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 52/76/34
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 868
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 805



    Description:
       Story of my life.


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    dotsOutcast.dots
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    So misjudged, so misunderstood
    Was a lonely little girl in a blazed neighborhood
    She never really did anything big for herself
    Except write of her pain in the books on the shelves

    They called her "goth" and they called her a loser
    If only you knew anything, you'd know I'm far from either
    And it was small things like this that made her question her trust
    For even the very few people she knew and she loved

    You realize you're lying to yourself when you say you don't care
    But letting them see her pain was something she wouldn't dare
    So she closed her eyes and imagined herself in a world with no hate
    And wasting more tears on something so senseless would be her only mistake




    Submitted on 2007-04-08 22:11:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow... sounds amazing.. wish you kept going with it... !

    ~!*Jackie*!~
    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      All I have to say is NICE! I can sense where your coming from totally here.
    Keep going girl
    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      good, but it should be MUCH longer... you left me wanting more, and that's not good, cuz I should be satisfied when I read it. anyway... I can relate to the subject matter a little, so I like it.
    | Posted on 2007-04-08 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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