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    dots Submission Name: My Heart Sworddots
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    Author: FallenAngelJC
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 47/53/41
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsMy Heart Sworddots
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    The last of Evening's Light graces my escaping Soul,
    Echo-ing memories ripple through my broken Mind,
    The fire glows dim as ember within my empty Heart,

    Angels deserve a will to cry...
    Heroes deserve a right to bleed...
    Soilders deserve the time to rest...

    And yet I hold to my sword, gripping it with will,
    I raise my sheild, holding it with spirit
    There is no time for me...

    Ask me a reason, I fight for you
    Far beyond my grasp, I reach for you
    Falling, only to rise again

    I whisper...
    Without holding the sword, I cannot protect you,
    But while holding the sword, I cannot embrace you...




    Submitted on 2007-04-09 07:49:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    I just can't tell you which part of this piece would be my favorite because I find the entire poem to be written exceptionally brilliant! I have great love for fantasy and the captions you just created here are absolutely astounding and must be coming from what I can only refer to as a beautiful mind. My sincere compliments to you!

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    | Posted on 2007-07-05 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      "Angels deserve a will to cry...
    Heroes deserve a right to bleed...
    Soilders deserve the time to rest... "
    and
    "Without holding the sword, I cannot protect you,
    But while holding the sword, I cannot embrace you..."
    are my fav sentences...
    you know why.
    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. This poem is amazing, I loved how it flowed together. I loved the last stanza it is to put into words: beautifully sad. I love the way you ended the poem with them, because I don't believe any other words could have evoked quite the same emotion.
    ~T.
    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by T. Garrett | [ Reply to This ]



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