Description: You never know how much you impact someone by just words. I'm talking from personal experiance here I guess.
[[A few people were asking me to make this longer. I kinda agree, it does seem unfinished. I'll leave the old one up incase you guys dont like my second go on this. Thanks to everyone who gave me feedback on the original one. I'm always looking for ways to improve myself as a writer.]]
So misjudged, so misunderstood
Was a lonely little girl in a blazed neighborhood
She never really did anything big for herself
Except write of her pain in the books on the shelves
They called her "goth" and they called her a loser
If only you knew anything, you'd know I'm far from either
And it was small things like this that made her question her trust
For even the very few people she knew and she loved
Pretty soon when she looked in the mirror
The reflection she witnessed was one that scared her
A beautiful girl is starting to beleive what she hears
The verbal abuse she suffered every day by her peers
Oh mirror mirror on my fist printed wall
Am I really the homliest one of them all?
Am I really that hidious to deserve all of this?
In minutes afterward, her life was over by seven cuts down the wrist
Now she lies cold in the ground under a polished stone
All because your words made her feel unbareably alone
Her heartbreaks were those of your own harrassment before
Tell me,what exactly did you do that for?
wow...its really good...uhh....i agree with your topic...people judge others to harshly before even knowing them...and to call others names is really cruel...i know how it feels to be made fun of and to be a loner so to speak...its no fun at all....but i over came that so maybe (if this is about you in some sense) you can over come it to...and not let what others say bother you because they are the ones who are insecure and have to tear people down to make themseves "feel" bigger and better...but they are not...just be yourself...great poem....