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    dots Submission Name: Passagedots
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    Author: wildriver
    ASL Info:    18/Female/kearney, NE
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 13/12/12
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 403
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       I'm not sure when i wrote this...or why:D


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    dotsPassagedots
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    I'm running back
    to where sand sifts
    and lands on things
    that sit alone.

    Were no path begins,
    or ends,
    and has not direction
    to bring you back home.

    Clouds never cry,
    the sun never shadows;
    songs without singers
    and words without grace.

    Time never passes
    or waits,
    for endless tears
    ever flowing




    Submitted on 2007-04-09 20:35:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this. Its like time is stopped. It's got alot of emotion in it.
    | Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]


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