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    dots Submission Name: Fuckdots
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    Author: Guernica
    ASL Info:    17/male
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 77/114/67
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFuckdots
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    Fuck. Fuck.
    fuck. fuck. fuck.
    fuck.
    Fuck. Fuck.

    Fuck the grass that is now cutting my big toe.
    fuck weddings and the way they keep cheap champagne companies in business
    and the fucking lemon cakes,
    fuck lemons and the way they seem to find themselves in all otherwise seemingly good food.

    Fuck.
    fuck. fuck.

    Fuck me in a way I won't recover from
    and fuck you so that you'll remember this for life (and finally get on with it).




    Submitted on 2007-04-09 20:50:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you couldve said "[censored]" to more things.
    im confused as towhat your still saying "[censored]" to....a little help, please.
    -Thief
    | Posted on 2007-04-10 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]
      ouch.
    venting?
    | Posted on 2007-04-10 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]


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