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    dots Submission Name: I AM.... for the music loversdots
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    Author: silentpoison
    ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204/259/118
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI AM.... for the music loversdots
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    i am...
    mind blowing metal riffs
    placed lightly over
    punk power chords

    i am...
    upbeat reggae strokes
    infused with catchy
    pop punk lyrics

    i am...
    ska horns
    under
    grind core
    playing with
    scene kids
    wearing
    tight pants




    Submitted on 2007-04-09 22:04:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      its cute.0..nice poem...I love music...
    -Amber-
    | Posted on 2007-04-10 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]


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