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    dots Submission Name: TRUE BORN STARdots
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    Author: flow_air
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/1/4
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTRUE BORN STARdots
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    Cry no more my dear
    Do not let the tear be dropped
    Let them know
    Allow those few to note
    A glim of your strenght

    You may without hope
    so they say
    you may be alone
    so they say
    but...
    What do they know
    Even a very small shine
    Is still bright
    Even for an inch

    I believe they know nothing about it
    Not even for a drop of rain
    so, have no fear my dear..
    Be brave as a lion
    For a young and untrained one
    Is not a matter..

    So there is time
    Waiting..




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