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    dots Submission Name: Family Tiesdots
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    Author: MornSweetSong
    ASL Info:    21/female/wales
    Elite Ratio:    4.42 - 110/83/46
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       The happiest thing I've written in ages.


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    dotsFamily Tiesdots
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    I admire you for your strength of mind and heart.
    When trouble rears its ugly head, you rip it apart.
    All of my enemies, you happily tear limb from limb.
    You always took care of me, I never needed a thing.

    When others choose to laugh in my direction.
    You simply smile, and smother me with affection.
    When you needed guidance on this hellish path called life,
    You would not tell anyone else, would not burden them with your strife.

    You're my saviour, my Ghandi, my Martin Luther King.
    Your inner light outshines every single room you're in.
    The love and faith you place in me makes the person you see today.
    You've got charisma and attitude, you make blue skies out of grey.

    This poem does not do justice, for the fabulous person you are.
    You are my glowing sun, and my shining star.
    I love you more than life itself, cos you're here for me when I go through hell.
    You'll always mean the world to me, my one and only sister Kel.




    Submitted on 2007-04-10 11:13:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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