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    dots Submission Name: Tresaure In The Inboxdots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1204
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 926



    Description:
       Author notes
    My good friend and fellow artist on allpoetry Voices accepted my invitation to give me 2 (reply,data) words so I could push my limits and creativity

    Here is his link to the webpage of Voices

    http://allpoetry.com scam/Voices


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    dotsTresaure In The Inboxdots
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    An email reply
    of a romantic scent
    blooming among data
    in never ending fields
    of Xerox copies,
    memos and meetings
    has fully grabbed
    my heartís attention
    as the lush digital violets
    and origami roses
    overtake my mind
    spirit and soul
    with the mere odour
    allowing me
    to feel flowing freely
    like chalky white doves
    taking to the sky
    for the very first time.
    To sore
    ever so higher
    on gentle angel wings
    like Doveís
    body lotion
    washing my worries away
    in one single application
    lifting my spirits
    to an all time high.
    Till my 87 coffe
    runs complete stale
    smelling like
    nothing more
    than shoe polish
    and life simply retakes
    its natural course
    of course.







    Submitted on 2007-04-10 21:06:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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