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    dots Submission Name: "the invisible enemy"dots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
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    dots"the invisible enemy"dots
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    how many times a day do the trees pass?
    spine the wonderful light across them
    the velvet morning expanding slow
    and every other second a vacant memory cell

    the sky seems to grave these hours
    the subtle lines of my blue skin
    spelling out the heartbeats
    minute corridors into my secret brain

    ash seems to be growing from fingers
    old places to put away our dreams
    simple boxes and the cedar eyes
    with teeth around the folding edge

    i have managed to master water
    become as it is, through it
    the perfect sliding smile of yesterday
    still cupped in my hands unlike easter

    placented from my darling chime
    stowed inside countless lockets bent
    it's not a question of time so much as reason
    but how many times have we said that still waiting?

    breathing every moment like they're flustered
    feeling every piece of curling air
    i'm still locked inside the chambers
    of my heart, below me, photographed from the side

    "the invisible enemy" is our inability to accept love
    it is to be feared because it is so foreign
    not in the sense of our ability to feel it
    but in our ability to preserve its sacred flame




    Submitted on 2007-04-11 00:19:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmmm it was well written there's no argueing that but i dunno i didn't really like it. i suppose it just wasn't the flavor i'm used to with you. well written
    | Posted on 2007-04-11 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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