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    dots Submission Name: Of a yearningdots
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    Author: cabbalistic
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 47/35/12
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 277
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    dotsOf a yearningdots
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    Parting deep waters
    that seep through fingers
    less benign.

    To eclipse moonshine
    with thoughts shimmering,
    uncolored.

    Bless ragged vision,
    a twinkle amidst thorns,
    of hating.

    Oh, cross-legged soul!
    Your gaze pondering
    stars afar.

    Willing peace,
    not pieces of fate,
    a world free for all




    Submitted on 2007-04-11 01:55:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow i loved this piece from start to finish i love the structure i love the flow and the imagery well delivered

    Timmy S. Edgar
    | Posted on 2008-10-07 00:00:00 | by Timmy S. Edgar | [ Reply to This ]
      It starts "deep" and continues that swim. A very thoughtful and ultimately considerate state of mind follows. A nice read for this morning, thanks!
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Its very abstract but sounds great read out loud. Writes like these spawn all kinds of revelations and memories among readers...but those who appreciate that sort of thing are but a few of far between.

    Don't lose your taste for creating work like this, but don't ever restrict yourself to it either.


    MyX
    | Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]



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