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    dots Submission Name: Sadness Comes Undonedots
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    Author: Wired
    Elite Ratio:    7.76 - 21/11/16
    Words: 264
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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       Re-write of one of my older songs.


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    dotsSadness Comes Undonedots
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    Another day goes by, and I feel so low
    when I know I should be high.
    And I wish I had a simple answer for you.

    But I...

    I don't understand why I can't bring myself
    to wipe the tears from my eyes.
    And I can't pick myself up off the floor...

    Another day I felt alone.
    Another night I sat by the phone.
    Another reason I prefer to stand on my own.

    Another time my heart could break.
    Another empty bed when I wake.
    Another lie would be much more than I could take.

    So tell me I'm not wasting my time.
    And tell me I'm the one
    you want by your side as the years go by.
    And the sadness comes undone.

    I open up my eyes to the sunlight
    and I'm feeling much more alive.
    And I realize that there's no such thing
    as a simple answer for me.

    I apologize
    for the softer side I all too often chastise.
    Can you sympathize?
    Help me pick myself up off the floor?

    Another day I was not alone.
    Another night not spent by the phone.
    Another reason I can't stand to be on my own.

    I won't allow my heart to break.
    I know you'll be there when I wake.
    I guess that's why they say we learn from our mistakes.

    I know that I'm not wasting my time.
    I know that I'm the one
    you want by your side as the years go by.
    So the sadness comes undone.




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    ||| Comments |||
      OH... the saddness is UNDONE to say the least. And yes I will always be the one you awake to in the morning you will no longer have to wait by the phone, for a certain someone to call because i'll be by your side. Threw it all the think the thin the bad the good.. and i always want to be by your side you are the one for me just as much as i am the one for you i love yo dave i love you with every ounce i can give and i'll do all i can to give you more!!!

    ~!*jackie*!~

    please understand you are the only one for me.. the only person, the only man you understands me the way i need to be understood! i love you
    | Posted on 2007-04-12 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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